Dam i like your closer rascal. good punch and you had good flow and decent humor. overall that was a good verse...
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And the Conclusion.. MW= Herb.. with wack punches..AKA No Hoper..
End It with Dopeness.. put no lid on your coffin.. B/c you don't deserve a closer..

but yo i could give a monkeys uncle to structure cuz in real flows you dont see stucture...
7/10

MW...that verse was a good verse...
had ok punches and some flow...
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Ya names Rascal(haha) I dont mean to be cruel
A name like that sounds like ya raps need to be in pre-school

keep the (this out of your verse) it not only looks gay but it is gay....
5/10

vote~rascal