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Old 06-21-04, 12:29 PM   #10
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LMAO!! Damn, this battle was tight and funny yo. :laughs: Dissonance, brah, I gotta give you yah props on this. Yo lines cracked up:

You’re shook punk, but no amount of shaking is waking you up from this-dream
To find you I just follow the "yellow brick road"…otherwise known as your "piss-stream"
***HAR
I "stole yer dictionary" and left you "lost for words" like tourists-without-a-map
Yer win’s as likely as loosing weight at Wendy’s, you’re sure-but-I-doubt-you-can
Like an anorexic girl in a buffet line this kid can’t seem to finish what he-started
only reason your "legally ill" is cuz doctors diagnosed you "mentally retarted"
***Loved this, though it was kinda stretched

Mixtape, yah did yah thang too brah:
Yo fake ass gangsta , rap sounds better when lines rhyme…
You crossed the path from rap ta bull shit, and thats not even a fine line…
***The opening line was whack but you made up for it with the second. And it ain't a fine line from rap to bull shit!
I live fa disease, I'm the incredible sound flowa…
I'm makin the Brooklyn Niggas Known with enough spit I could drown Noah…
*** Drown Noah. LMAO

Whew, that was a hot battle. Really close but, I'm going to have to give it to:

Dissonance
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