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Old 06-21-04, 12:42 PM   #11
Ca'lam
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an off the bat, no antizipation of reading my post unless u need to lol...
v/Diss..

i like the way everyline was a punch, that was hot.. and you rhyme scheme was good to..

Vocab:tied(no one stood out more than the other)
Flow:to me it was close.. but i liked Diss flow al little better..
Punches: definatly Diss.. had quite a bit in there
PersonalsIss.. disses werent all general..
Metas:Mixtape

Mixtape you did ya thang, but you didnt come hard wit punches like Diss did..
if my vote counts it goes to Dissonance.
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