haha deleon i really liked that floppy disc line that was classic really good. ur flow and strucutre were good until it came to that one vers eu had posted before that was jus hard to read. ur punches were ok so it made the hard ones hit even harder. pappa u need a lota work dont talk about urself in a verse work on complex punches and make your verse have harder punches. work on strucutre and flow shorten ur lines.

v/deleon