red dot:

comment- overall GARBAGE...
punches:5/10
personals:3/10
creativity:4/10
vocab:5/10

score:17/40

suggestions:2moro's gaol, "must rhyme"....
next- flow is key, use it next time
structure- didnt even score that, cause there was none...
personals- give us some dirt on your opponent, you expect to beat him with a freestyle?

Limited Edition:

comment- not bad, semi weak for being in elevated front lines...
punches:7/10
personals:6/10
creativity:4/10
vocab:5/10

score:22/40

suggestions: kinda weak, but it damn sure stepped on "8th Disciple representitive"...

you could work more on punches, if they would have hit harder, you would have KO'ed somebody,

my vote: Limited Edition

return the favor... http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130233 ...

~Fem~ From BP, holla at em

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