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Old 06-21-04, 04:51 PM   #13
$pitilicou$
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From: England
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nerves ur verse...

I got to handle my lightweight so when the Nerves see yu i'll murk you]
fuck what you spoke you wont do shit cuz the violence just verbal]
no rhyme.. its ok 6.5/10
you out of place in the rap battle just like an alien]
spit these lyrics in yo head till the pressure cracks your cranium]
2nd line.. okay first sucks 5/10
this bitch in colorado freezin' while im high off the pacific]
what the fuck in the water out there? cuz yo style so horrific]
1st line is wack 2nd line is ok.. 5.5/10
this lil noob think he got heart but he really living in fear]
so give this rap life up faggot and pick another carreer]
ive heard the carreer line too much 5/10
like car accidents verbals left smashed and bent im non-stop]
on pointing out that hes a bitch and his writings just a blot]
one of ur better lines.. 7/10
lightning strikes down upon this ho until he is verbally silent]
i cant hear what you sayin' like a midget rappin' to a GIANT]
ur best line.. 7.5/10

if i had to say worst of the worst dawg u have big problems rappin and naww it aint a curse//
u rap like a 2 year old nuttin but a blah blah blah verse//
sucked. 4/10
dawg i read one line of ur flow and ur already gettin on my nervez//
this cat gonna get physicly served,give this bitch what he diserves//
how do you get served on the net? good 6.5/10
crush him wit my spokin verbs,im more verbal than violent thas why ima murk ya dumb ass put u in da corner like ya moms leavin u silent//
damn son ya breath stink try some trident//
structure and flow are off.. bad second line.. 5/10
i could out flow him even if i was mild violence//
bitch sounds like mother goose and dr. seuess united//
good line. *giggles* 7/10
he tried to throw punches and i still aint frightend//
he gonna need medical treatment cuz ima leave him verbally blinded//
another good line.. 7/10
he like clipse but he aint grinden,took him a whole year to write a thiesies//
ima whole new era of raps endagerd species//
nice i liked second line.. 8/10
ima leave u on the unwanted list cuz aint no one wanna here a lame ass bitch//

overall i think we can see that verbal merked nerves.

v/verbal

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