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This was my first time chekin' a topical battle. It was tight. I read both rimes thoroughly, and Femcee kept a consistent flow. I liked the structure. Your dialogue between the devil and angel was tight! Everything was working. Since this was a battle of styles, I would have to say that Femcee had the better vocab and wordplay. There were no punches in this one, just storytelling. Femcee was able to captivate my imagination...the imagery in your rime was on point.
B.X.P: I wasn't feeling you at all. Nice story though, but it didn't have a consistent flow, and it wasn't interesting. Take it back to the lab. Elevate!!
Vote: Femcee!!
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