this battle was extremely weak....

Nerves you text like you're freestyling, focused on mutli's and palyed disses, with no original material at all.... try using a punch here and there, works good for battles... you really should seek elevation help to get up to par. You have some skillz, but text is different and you need to approach it different. Use witty wordplay and puns to create a punch and an "oooh" effect. Your shit was basic.

damage - not much better, but i see a hint of wit in your verse... all that 'nine' and 'bless ya spine' shit needs to go, it's garbage, but this line:

"Why waste good bars on this clown? it’s obvious this kat’s rhymes is .shook. …
Don’t tell kats you’re from Oakland,how da fuck u think that’ll make me .look. … ?"

shows you know how to use sarcasm to hurt your opponent. Weak battle guys, but damage gets my vote. For one punch. I can help both of you reach potential, just hit me up. pz

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