HELLonEARTH u got my vote

HELLonEARTH: u plain out greased this dude. ur punches were aight. structure o.k., and fuck personals u dont need to know shit about the nigga. u had really good sim, and metas in there
ur best line i think with a decent punch:

Call ya self "Al Gore", because you won't win this "Lyrical election"//
Ya weak and ya ain't straight, like a Dysfunctional Erection//

weak opener: (it was lame)
Ridin "Mens Cocks" the only way you could be an "MC"//
Get sumbody's attention


Eclapt: u did not get my vote 'cause:

u need to get to writin before u start postin again. no lie homie. just need to elevate.
lines and structure was horrendous. i actually got bored reading urs stuff. there were no punch lines. overall to be honest i was not just feelin it dawg.

my v/ Hellon Earth

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