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Old 06-21-04, 09:15 PM   #11
For$akeN
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REDDOT'S DROP:

alright L.E your the leader of a wack crew ill intentionz
while im dropping hot shit getting honorable mentionz
WEAK SELF GLORIFICATION NOT NEED 5.5/10
you think you hot while your just candian bacon
you call yourself a topical head but you just fakin
keying up typing your verse but your hands is shakin
NOT A GOOD PUNCH NOT FEELING 5/10
you so nervous u know red dot is droppin a hot freestyle
while you molestin ten year old boys you pedophile
WOW DO YOU HAVE PROOF IF NOT....NO PERSONAL 6/10
little bitch your touching boys in their private parts
saying "i will give you candy" like sweet tarts....
WEAK WEAK WEAK 5/10
alright you didnt know reddot would rip ya.. right?
fuck yourself you got a dick and a pussy... *hermaphrodite
DECENT BEST PUNCH YET 7/10
alright so im gonna end this battle saying you a sick fuck
soo next time you wanna battle let me wish you good luck
WEAK CLOSER TO FINISH 5.5/10

OVERALL: 5.6/10///56%

LE'S DROP:

All's you can see...is tha 'red dot' aimed at ya heart
Murder 1st degree...a breath of ma skill blows yours apart
GOOD OPENER 7/10
Steppin' up to tha best...You gon' be 9-3...haven' u heard?
You can't beat 'better'...and the better wasonly an herb
THAT WAS AIGHT NOTHING SPECIAL THO 6.5/10
Why did I decide before...to let you back in tha dopest crew?
Why do you try? Against tha 'Master'...wat can 'Hopeless' do?
WEAK ARE YOU EVEN TRYING??????6/10
You claim that your a 'newbie rapper'...isn't that amusin'...
You so wack...I'd rather battle a cockroach that's producin'
OKAY PUNCH NOT THE GREATEST 6.5/10
Learn to take shit seriously...your destined to be in a circus...
Take tips from these battles...
...but then you still could not be able to merk shit...
AIGHT NOT A GOOD CLOSER BUT IT'LL DO FINE 6/10

OVERALL:7/10///70%

VOTE GOES TO: Limited Edition
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