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Old 06-21-04, 10:42 PM   #20
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Miss lyricist= you did good with ya punches. Every line you strated to improve cuz ya first line was kinda weak but you still got betta.

Hoops= Ya spit was ok but could be betta. You didnt get my vote cuz of the line about sars. that punchline is played out. And ya other punches were lame or they werent hittin hard at all.
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