eyedenty: your first verse wasnt too hott i think it lacked almost everywhere...punches were decent but none were really that hard...sometime your verse was complex others it was too simple...as for your second verse you opened up the rhyme scheme and came hotter...2nd verse was way better than the 1st....the thing you need to work on most tho is the structure its all over the place...one line is short and the next line is way too long even them up and youll do better

overall : 14/20

spul your first verse was decent good punches a couple ok personals between both verses...pretty good structure it was choppy in maybe 1 or 2 spots but overall you held it together...good wordplay and flow...everything stayed pretty consistent.....i dont think u had that many hard hitting punches either but you had more than eye did...so that gives you an advantage in this battle...you lacked in the personals tho usually u do alot of hott personals not that many this time around in either verse

overall : 17/20

vote: Spul

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