to me this was one sided... eye you came close, but you didnt really come close... i think the only reason you got that close is because spul didnt really flow like he was tryna beat sumone better then him... 2 verses yikes heh..
Eye: it seemed like in places you set up what could potentially be a nice lil jab, but then when i read the next line, you let it down... you jsut need to work on connecting it.. liek this line right here:
Cuz my verbal attacks impail wordz thru U bitches/
Aim for Ur legs, Put Ur style in a wheel chair and It still aint this gifted/
^ i thought that could have been a nice punch if you worded and re did the last line right..
other than those flaws you got nice battle tactics i guess..
spul: i can see you didnt really try to hard... cause it was ok.. still beat your opponent.. but i wanna see some guts ne blood and all those wonderful things ^_^...
v/spul
drop an honest one:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130918...
much appreciated.