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Old 06-22-04, 01:27 AM   #8
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Light Weight
 
Posts: 258
From: EastOaklandCalifornia
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IM A FORCE TO BE RECKONED WITH ON DA MIC//
DA HOLLOW TIPS LEAVE U LIT UP LIKE A LITE BRIGHT//
4/10 coo punch
I'LL MAKE U RETHINK UR WHOLE DAMN PLAN//
I CAN EXPLAIN PREGNATEN YA MOMS, BUT CAN U EXPLAIN FUCKIN A MAN//
4/10 ok punch
I'LL EXPLOIT UR SPNAL CORD AND CALL IT A RIP//
U MIGHT HANDLE DAT BUT CAN U HANDLE DA RUBBER GRIP//
3/10 coo
AND WONT GET PAST 20 AFTER I EMPTY THE CLIP//
I USED TO METAPHORICALLY SAY I WAS FIRE//
AND WEN IM DONE CHARRING U, I'TLL LOOK LIKE I PUT U IN A DEEP FRIER. 2/10 lacks structure

That bitch shit you be write’n, its got me laughn//
I think you should get an award! In tha King Of Wack Pagent// 6/10 funny punch
Only wanted spit 5 lines? Dawg are u fuckn retarded?//
And after ya lose, don’t use tha excuse, Im new at this, I just started// 5/10 good one
You know wut FUCK tha 5, and u want half hour for ya rhymes!!!//
Before you even done wit your linez, i been readn everythin in tha site 5 timez// 3/10 ?
Tha rulez that u wanted, tha shit was unbelievable//
You must been so damn high when u wrote tha, cuse ya rhymes is unreachable// 3/10
Im sorry I went over tha limitz, I see u agree, ya rulez aint worth even goin//
I feel bad, im killn this herb… fuck it im done flow’n// i gota go with lil scrappy
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