Lil-trip
structure was fucked...all of ur lines were stretched...flow was wack as hell, mainly because of ur structure...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...u didnt have very many punches, some of it was just completely random and pointless...but the punches u did have barely connected, and some didnt connect at all...a few personals were attempted...

Immortal_Souljah04
structure wasnt very good...ur lines were also stretched quite a bit...ur flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good as well...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...

Overall
both had some metas...and both had pretty good wordplay...neither had a good structure...and neither had a stable flow...Souljah had more punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...ImmortalSouljah gets my vote...

VOTE - IMMORTAL_SOULFHA04

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