mjust23
dont type in all caps...its gay, and annoying...structure was weird...some of ur lines were good, some were stretched...flow fell off because of the difference in line lengths and such...no metas...wordplay was simple, and most of it was played...none of ur punches connected...no personals...

lil scrappy
structure was ok..a lot of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off because of the stretchness...no metas...wordplay was also simple, and played...a few of ur punches connected...personals were ok...[/b]

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a stable flow...neither had metas...both had simple, but played wordplay...lil scrappy had more harder hitting punches...lil scrappy also had more personals...so basing off of that...lil scrappy gets my vote...

VOTE - LIL SCRAPPY

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