I'm gonna start this voting off it looks like...
Sorry to steal someone elses style, but I like how he put it:
Vote = Tweeza (Now you can waste your time reading why if you'd like)

You'll be lucky enough if people don't ignore you//
Why don't u just give up and I'll make a rap up for you//
(Good punch, funny stuff)
Just sit back, relax and lemme get this off my chest//
You're not an MC, you're a fucken 'piece of shit' at its best//
(Good solid hits...not super technical, but very solid)
Those were just my fav. lines from you...On the opposite side:
You took too much time to make a rap and didn't get that far//
Obviously you're a noobie it looks like u tried too hard//
(Felt like it lost a bit of flow/structure...)
You're too new to battle me I've got experience//
Battle someone easier so try battling Dissonance//
(Not against it cuz you used me as a diss, {what you were gettin at was good} but dawg...my name just does not rhyme with experience...lol)

Horus:
Tweeza, your style is more chessy than a Round Table Pizza/
that's why it's easy ta eat ya, i'll release the heat ta defeat ya/
(Good start, nothin really bad about it...but from then on it starts fallin apart)
you know what "son", i should treat you like beef and just ground you/
(Nice...first time I seen that one, I like)
but your an insult to rap, you need to be killed, so i'll do/
take you out, coz you lower the mode average of hip hop's value/
(Another good punch, but the delivery could have been stronger)
Bad:
so fasho, we could see saw/
i went first, gave you a plate and now you have something to feed off/
(??? I get the second line...but you didn't work see-saw into the first one very good at all...took me three or four times before i caught that it was a play and not just stupidity {No Offense by the way})
The only reason I voted against you was because other than the nice punches here and there, none of it was completely solid. Your structure was a bit hard to catch and the flow chopped quite a bit in spots...I do like the fact that you "played" with words more than tweeza, shows more thought into it.

So again: Vote = Tweeza

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