Can I use the same explanation? ^^^^

Basically Smirf, You structure was painful to read (not the basis of my vote because if i were to take the time to copy, paste, and hit return, it would probably be a lot easier, but I'm not going to do that now am I? So very bad structure)
Flow was choppy more than it should have been and there weren't any extremely special plays or punches to save it. You tried a few multi's in there, but they could use some cleaning up.

Phantom: Nothing special from you, but every line had either a punch/play, meta/sim, or was setting up for something in the next line. Flowed allright, a little chop, but not as bad as Smirf's. Short lined structure kept it fresh for reading and helped your flow from getting too off. Good rhymes and I liked the punches..

Vote = Phantom

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