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Old 06-22-04, 03:22 AM   #14
Ca'lam
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hahahahahaa :
rattle what you got, your the reason i attack people/
your about as popular as Bush is to black people/
^omg... lmao... funny shit, cause i hate bush!!!...8/10 for humor

you could barley win a battle huh? the shit is a shame/
and the only way you'll get votes against me is if you sign in under different names/
i've seen your battles yo, all the shit is the same/
your sweeter than lemonade, and "EyeDentdy" i'm living "proof" that your shit is just lame/
^no... that was weak ass opener..good think ur shit got much better as i read..4/10

over all that verse was hott... 8.1/10

eye:
cuz U agree wit me so much, niggaz would think U giving head at the coarner/
the only booth Uv ever been in, involved U spending Ur last pennys and quarters/
^first line wack.. but last line was nice.. 6.7/10

watching as Ur ear drums pop from the bullets when they whistle/
My punchlines split Horus pressice in pressure points just to make sure they hit U/
^ok finisher

over all even tho i hated that opener horus.. dont ever do that again lol... the rest of that verse was hot like soup... he better wordplay and an flow..

v/horus....eye ur verse had lots of potential, so it wasent like you got murked or nothin..you did ya thang
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