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Old 06-22-04, 04:26 AM   #25
Plutonium
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Im already on top of the buildings, waiving while pissin off the peeks/
WillNova sound like the type of nigga who still piss his sheets/
^^that's funny shit man
and I'll staight out just ripp you nicely, and leave you gashin out the right knee/
this kid wants to be Eyedentdy so much he sucked my managers dick just to get my I.D./
^^that's good shit too

Need to work on the flow in ur first verse, ups & downs everywhere, otherwise your shit was hot, loved your punches, lots of wit

and that Identdy Jokes been used befor, like your girls tampon/
You aint battlin, you trying to make love songs like Cam'ron/
^^your punches hit hard too in ur 2nd verse, flow was much better, good job

Willnova:

this scenes an obscenity, head explode like kennedy//
dangerous tendousy, I'll have you change ya Identity//
try and get rid of me, you'll do the complete opposite//
slain from all the shots u licked, reigned wit all the props I get//
^^i could really feel your starter, you had better flow and multies in the 1st verse than Eyedentdy .

lookin for a challenge, u gave me reccess like subsitute teachers//
I get kicks out of kids, like I ran u for ur sneakers//
prophet and preacher, recite scriptures the world can feel//
spit heat at cook-outs, like there was hot coals all in my grill//
got beef for ya meal, so backin off would be a safe bet//
cause I stay using magnums whether its the chrome or latex//
^^you really fired up here will, nice verse, you look like you put eyedentdy in his place with these few lines

good job both of you, although Eyedentdy has the advantage because he has such long verses and Will's was short, i'ma vote for eye because his punchs just sent will flying.

vote/ Eyedentdy
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