Donsuper aint drop yet...hes gota make his prewrites have strucuture and flow...
this aint 8 mile son...sex is the only time you blow...
ha ha...but a little played now that i think about it
your a waste of time...an easy meal like lean quisine or stovers...
you dont battle cause your like old pasta...nobody wants the left-overs...
ha ha....nice
C.S...the biggest C.ock S.uckers on this website...
hes prolly some nerd at home...sittin sayin "wow rap on the net's tite"...
ha ha....ha
your a kingpin?...please ive seen bigger ones bowling...
and he knows...cause that ball isnt the only ones he likes holding...
ha ha.......aight
your super?...premium is better look at gas prices its cheaper...
this battle is jus like all the cartoons...the villan is weaker...
ok closer

overall you had some punches and personals they hit and made me laugh
overall a good flow ok wordplay not many multis good drop

overall-7./10

S.V

"up shits creek this weekend? im s.v., then welcome to the deep end
pull out my piece and squeeze it...bullet hole put the O 'tween his d.n. (dOn)
aight...
ah shit, dons a convict...an o.g....you could say a good ol' parolee
he's done time...'cuz the fugazzi library cards he sold looked phoney
ha ha this ones funny
yeah, i'll admit it kid...your recorded spits are important...(psych!)
through the wire of course, when your snitchin' to law enforcement
aight....
i wanted to inform you, warn you with some important news...
"exported then deported!!!" italian stallions become imported glue
ok...
in front of his weak crew, don got killed in broad daylight...
the mafioso witnessed, testified and relocated the same night"
aight closer

aight overall i wasnt feelin your verse...to be truthful i only liked the
intro and outro......funny shit i think you could of came harder in this battle

overall-6.5/10

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