this was OK...nuttin good tho....no offense....

M your structure needs to change....
1. Kill CAPS
2. Kill //'s
3. No herbish smiley's at the end......

otherwise u had sum funny metiphores. I liked the seinfield line.

TheOne.....
your structure was better...but don't space it....
your whole verse was kinda weak....u focused on ryhming to much....
and wit the same words to many times.

also you talk about urself alot....Skewl....try to focus on him more......

and spell some what correct....CAN'T.....

Vote- M

when soundclick gets back up....hit my audio battle up wit an honest vote...thanks....