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Old 06-22-04, 12:24 PM   #23
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Im gonna have to go with Damaged on this one. His structure was better, flows and rhymez too. Overall, he did a better job that Gods.

God, work on your structure. Make sure that your lines have the same amount of syllables or at least make them close, otherwise the rhymes will be off. Rap outloud.

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