YO, IT MIGHT TAKE A COUPLE OF BRAIN STORMS FOR U REALIZE U DEALIN WIT A MAN//
FUC WIT US AND DA RUBBER GRIP IS GONNA BE FITTED 2 MA HAND//
ok...but no punch
U REMIND ME OF A PILLOW, SOFT AND FLUFFY//
U BE DEAD SAYIN DAT NIGGA MJUST SNUFFED ME//
aight....
COME CLOSE 2 MA SET, ITS LIKE U IN A MINEFIELD//
U DEEP THROAT MORE GUYS DEN DAT BITCH FROM SEINFIELD//
ha ha...ok
A KILLA COBINATION IS MA LYRICS AND MA RHYMES//
YALL GET GOOSE BUMPS JUS FROM READIN MA NEXT 2 LINES//
ok...but ya'll? no your dissin your opp
PUSSY PLUS FAGGOT EQUALS U//
TRY AN FUC WIT ME, I'LL TURN UR TONGUE BLUE//
ME KILLA, ME SLAYA DOWN, AND RESSURECT U//
BEN AFLECK IN GIGLI SEEMS TO ERECT U//
ok...
THIS GUY CANT RYHME, CAN HE?//
NAW, HES TO BUSY SUCKIN TRANNYS
aight....

not a great drop...didnt have great punches but you did do better than the one

6.0/10

i dont feel like breakin down the ones verse....but one your struc was
off and i think you could of done better.....work on using personals

vote-Mjust