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Damaged1
dont put the periods around the words that rhyme...it gets really annoying...structure wasnt good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the wackness ur structure had...u had some metas...a few of ur lines had wordplay...but where the hell r ur punches...i dont wanna read about u killin people wit gats and puttin them into caskets...those arent punches...only 2 of ur lines had punches...u had 1 personal as well...
Gods son
dont put the ** and the - - around ur words...thats newbish...so drop that shit...structure wasnt good...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness....u had tight metas...wordplay was also pretty tight...u had a few punches...and i saw 1 personal...
Overall
both had a wack structure...and a wack flow...both also had 2 punches, and one personals...Gods son had way more metas...and way better wordplay...so basing off of that...Gods son gets my vote in this close battle...
VOTE - GODS SON
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