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Old 06-22-04, 04:17 PM   #15
PoLiFicK
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Nice drop but both
accomplishment nice shit i was feelin yo verse thruought u kept it consitant nice punches and nice personals flow was tight as shit...

bestline-huh?
this kid is -gay wit his author-, or da fag dat types his lines
cuz by suckin his penis is the only way you got some -likeness rights- to ur rhymes

nice start.......

worsteline-none

Dirtboy yo shit was sick 2 just a lil stretched but it was nice punches was nice vocab was on point and flow was tight

bestline-already have lost to me accomplish get a win? only when he battles alone//
in the winners column? you don't belong like parking in a handicap zone//

hott

worsteline-none just shorting yo linez a little looks like a essay

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