eye and spul great battle really good.

eye-
1)your first verse opened up weak.consider hard punching persoanls in the first line it works good then do another hard one in the second line. u prolly werent on edge cause u didnt feel good.flow and structure werent bad. a little stretched in some places and some words didnt rhyme but the syllables fit.

2)okay your second verse came a lot harder. especially your first opener thats good thats how its done i liked that it had me laughin. next line was good too u did exactly the opposite of what you did on your first verse. punches in this battle were very good but in the first one they were very weak. the only thing that stayed constant was strucutre and flow but sometimes that would be stretched out. the only thing i know to improve on is to space out your lines to give the punches more of an effect.

not bad but i gota be honest spul came harder

SPUL-
1)first drop was good prolly cause u were heated and had somethin to write for cause he already dropped his. opener was nice consitent hard hitting punches. your strucutre was good flow was good and some good persoanls thrown in there it was good. verse was medium not ur best of drops.

2)this is where you got heated up.great punches personals and everything. didnt worry about strucuture or rhyming as much cause it came naturally i think cause u were more heated up. excellent drop.

v/SPUL

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