The Light
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sry for freeposting again, but i just re-read ur verse again eye, and it was good, but what i dont get is how you set up a punch so tight, and let it down... i mean your setups are pretty good:
then crack Ur chest cavitity on the floor while ur ribs tide to the bumper of my 4 door Hunda Accord/
Draging U off the floor while scoping the ambulances back door wit a 4' 4'/
^ annoying gangster theme, 4'4'?... second line wa garbage, first line was good.. its small shit liek that ... aight im done freeposting
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