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Old 06-23-04, 03:53 AM   #4
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hott shyt country but once again the strucutre just make the lines more even and your verse would have been hotter but still was some good shyt....

U'll never blend wit greats, hip hop sends its hate, since u turned it whack
I'm not even concerned wit fags, 5mics stepped to tha flames so I burnt this cat
Acted like Agassi n served his ass, worked his raps, till tha only thing left was worthless trash
I've got tha beef turning black, theres no turning back, this takes skill dawg you can't purchase that

^^^^ although the structure was messed up this part of his verse could beat alot of MC's on this board....good meta's and wordpplay and multies...good verse...keep em coming

overall:7.5/10

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