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Old 06-23-04, 03:57 AM   #40
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that was a decent verse...it wasnt too complex pretty simple...good structure...vocab was bad...some decent wordplay no multies...the meta about j-lo was hott tho...muthafuckin muthafuckers sounds good when you say it like that but its weak.... considering you wasnt dissing anyone in general it was decent

overall : 6/10

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