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Old 06-23-04, 01:12 PM   #7
Poppa Kap
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We all in AI so this vote should count.

Shadow my friend....dont act like a newbie...get rid of the "quotations" and links, and if u have to use a link make sure it has a point, some of ur lines with the links I read made me confused, I didnt see whay u used them. Prett basic verse, sorry pal but i didnt rate it much...ur best line...

please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried"

I would have to give this to shadow because at least his basic played punches were actual punches. weak battle and disapointed.

Vote=Shadow.

Both of u need to sort out ur wording aswell


still not good.

Ketch...ur doin newbie styles aswell with the whole-using-dashes-to break-up-text...DONT! You had some nices lines for wordplay but ur punches were weak as fuck. The envy line was decent but wasnt hard.