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Old 06-23-04, 01:38 PM   #8
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:

Shadow

10-2 and thinkin he's dope, but ill have him on a down hill slope
nobody wants to battle him cuz.... he "ketches dickriding votes"
ok....you could of used the 2nd line better
he says he is a "good mc'ee".... he's even swears its the truth
if it wasnt 4 his dickriders he woulda been murderd by a newb!
ok punch...
has no chance in this league either mixtape or he is the worse
just disperse.. u never gonna be first.. take a look at his verse
ok....could of done better with this one too
ur rhymes arent "cutting the cake" ..u must b losing ur footing
ur rhymes are "full-of-shit".. and the "proof is in the pudding"
ha ha...funny but didnt hit that hard
please leave "ketch".. this battle league wants "all jokes aside"
post ur weak rhymes in a skillet cuz they "bound to get fried"
ha ha...nice
ur "shit-verse" needs to be submited to a toilet. it "just reeks"
like a dinosaur.. after i kill him the wack mc'ees will b extinct
aight....ok line
the only time this bitch "drops-hott-shit" is from his "bowel"
cant handle the fact that he's wack.......just throw in the towel!!
ha ha..
do ur self a favor from now on just stay in bed under the sheets
cuz the "catch22" of it all is.................... ur destin-to-get-your-ass-beat
alright closer

ive seen you come better than this....you didnt need most of those links
you HAD punches and some personals..overall flow wasnt bad either

overall: 6.5/10



Ketch 22

You a cocky lil bitch, & this first day spittin it's a bad-decision,
cuz It's Wednesday, & verse could of used 3 days of mad-revision.
ok.....not feelin it

u set the wheels in motion, hope u can stop-what-u-started,
dude it Ain’t who's droppin first, its who droppin-the-hardest.
ok...wheres the damn punch

Since u wanna sin, got metaphors, multies & Spits-u’ll-Covet,
2 things you cant stop, my Natural Vigor & the initials-of-it.*
ok......decent

I’d give U visuals-of-it, but then you’d be lookin at the Sun,
& since-I’m-near-son, we both happy, u can finally Dis-a-peer-bum.****
no....dont use shit like this

Just like you name punk, ya Scripts, they got-no-substance,****
& Its ironic, cuz I’m hittin you, but Im takin shots-at-nothin.
ok....a little better

You could be Stephen King & still wouldn’t Make-IT-my-man,**
Came ta R.B.ta be an mc but you shoulda stayed-in-the-band.***
ok.....
got Talons in spades, be afraid of what Sprayed-out-of-the-mouth,***
but then again friend, ya used ta bein layed-out-on-the-ground.*****
ha...ok

As u see my Words play like kids, ya talent not up ta-specs-its-chidish
& since we family now... Just Call this a case of domestic-vilence******
ok closer.

i think ive seen you do better than this....not sure....but your puunches
were real weak...wordplay was good though....but you puches didnt
connect...overall the flow was aight..


overall:6.0/10


Vote: Shadow...becuz his punches hit harder