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Old 06-23-04, 02:16 PM   #8
DeLeon
Banned: Biting
 
Posts: 994
From: Sa-Town
IP:

Ambitious-
You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared,
why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there?
I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?'
& why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?!
If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup!
And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up
Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps
Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that!
Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans.....
Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance

you better read your verse again kid....cuz its just wack...some lines didnt even
rhyme.....punches were weak and that personal about the roc were gay...


4.5/10


Prolifick- i think breakin down your verse would be a waste of time becuz
i'll just be puttin his verse to shame even more...ive seen better from you
its like you didnt try....and you still merked him

Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination.....
Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation.....
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Killed his whole verse..

vote-Prolifick