your ryme did flow but, to me, dat was all it did. Im not saying this as ur opponent, I just think U should encorporate more creativity into the "way" U say Ur lines. Usually thats why most of my lines might appeare to be so stretched, becuz I go overboard and get too creative. I aint hating either, U could be good at this shit if U "tried" U know.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..