So while ur at it THROW away the rabbits foot//
it can't help u now, burnt to a crisp, site full of soot//
4/10 ok verse
if u look closely, this is freestyle, NO BOOKS!!!//
so even if u had pre written you'd still wouldn't land your hooks//
5/10 good punch
i'm gonna forget about tha votin ballad//
kause this kid right herr holds no talent//
5/10 another alright punch
as i let my intelligence hampers//
with more weight than your stinky pampers//
7/10 good punch and word usage
imma put out my fire to end this rap battle//
Your chance in winning this, is like u entering a raffle//
3/10 kinda a weak ending
sires verse:
don't start beef wit me, it's bad for your health
like teachers gradin papers...
here's pen, now come correct and check yourself
3/10 if thats your line
respect my skills, you could never hurt me.....
I'll help you learn
cuz the only thing you passed in school was herpes
4/10 alright punch
fuck a leap, just fuckin croak if you feelin froggy
speakin of big woody
stop lickin my dick, cuz my nuts are gettin soggy
6/10 best punch you threw
think I'm no showin? it's hilarious you havin doubts
and I don't bite
I chew..... bitches like you up, & spit em out
5/10 alright punch
when I post, it's over even if I have to re-key this
get off my penis
just cuz my hits smart, don't make you a genious
3/10 weak ass ending
24/50 Big
21/50 Sire
hit these up honestly also, dont haveto do all of them but one at least
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131129
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131098
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131070