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Old 06-23-04, 09:35 PM   #8
Ca'lam
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ummm.. v/horus...

T-Bo- your verse didnt have any punches that hi at all =/... you need to work on less filler and more content if you wanna elevate..

Horus- a nice lil verse, but you need to try and get ur self-glorification down a lil bit, not rippen em up enuff.. i think if you use self glorification like:
i show no empathy, show this slow ho some misery, low blows to hit his spleen/
^that should have been the setup for a nice lil punch... thats if you use sef glorification in my eyes...

v/horus.. aside from teh skill difference3 is looks like, tbo didnt really attack horus and thats why my vote is what it is..
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