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the one
Y u kallin urself sdizzle, u ain't even a nizzle
Or a nigga, who r da best, no doubt, fo shizzle
1/10 fuck ya racial shit white black dont give a shit
I mean sure, u wanna be a blak boy
But wait, i kan't be judgemental, i'm a white toy
2/10
Who likez to release his mind through rhymez
Aw..dissin u....man those were the easy timez
1/10 weak ass punch
They were easier then pullin big crimez, too easy
Or actin in a soap, which r sooo fukin cheesey
1/10 who u throwin punches at??
I saw ur "pretty challenged" naw ur just tryin
To be sum1 else, don't be sum1 else, ur lyin
2/10 weak punch
To urself, on the inside, that meanz u weak
A future in thiz path iz lookin really bleak
6/10 sounded better then the rest
Be u an no1 else, let go of the rap "threadz" be u an no1 else, u dum fuck
If thatz u, fine, but itz not ur look, like rappin, get sum help, beatin me!...u need luck
4/10 alright ender

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SDIZZLE
he bites his names from movies... so u know that hes all fake
... the one wouldn't be hard.... if he was on bodies by jake
6/10 nice opener and punch
hes a no-name.... hell be made famous as a lost to urs truely
........and ill have him seeing star like on the set of a movie
5/10 nice methaphor
u wont go far..... and the role u play in this battle is co-star
and u only pretent ur hard..... like faggot porn stars
6/10 lol i like your disses you a pimp
u dont write lines u bite mines.... and dig into my mind
..... and have u out cold..... like hes stuck in the alpine
4/10 alirhgt shit
these newbs give me headaches.... and with all my scolding
.....i cant seem to make him understand... not to use bolding
1/10 weak line
jesus all u use is fancy symbols trying to make his punches hit harder
...... and u saw ronald regan die.... do u want to be jimmy carter?
3/10 alright shit
to let u know...... the s in sdizzle.... well it stands for scott
and the ones on a c-trip.... cuzs hes been riding on my cock
3/10 weak ending

ONE-17/50
Sdizzle-28/50