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Old 06-23-04, 11:54 PM   #8
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ok jokah u had hard punches.i liked the structure again that earned points and ur opener was good. this was long but good verses from both of u.jokah some good personals i liked it and not a bad closer. dead great verse not bad at all. good opener weak punches good strucutre. it wasnt ur best the flow was on good but jus next time come wit harder punches and a lot harder personals u had a lota personals but they were kinda weak

v/jokah