honest breakdown...

first up is ambitious
You'll pick up the mic .... arms heavy liftin scared,
why crack on bedrock .. when ya already livin there?
5
I take one look at Illegal then I' thinkin 'y they flow?'
& why u say da Roc gone die when u buy dey clothes?!
7
If I dont like you... then is true that I'll snipe ya yup!
And you aint good kid, so dont let this site hype you up
6
Elite.... never that, you couldnt look smart droppin clever raps
Stop n sever rats, punches hit u but u wont remember that!
6
Leeway? i unno he thinks he'll blow up and be grabbin fans.....
Yea I know..... u thought u'd win wen u never hadda chance
4
hmm not great good flow...really taht's all that was good though...bad punches...not good personals...

polifick
Beating Newbs The Only Time You Gettin Applauded.....
He Catching More Boos Than A Drunk Wasted Achoolic......
Must Have Butterbean Cuz Visions His Punches Off Target....
Should Star On MTV Because Polifick Easly DissMisses You.....
He Came 2 Relaunch Because He A Replacement On Original......
Asscending Ass whoopens Go back 2 Origanal lyrical Crippally....
He Stay In Cypher..Because Thats As Close He gettin 2 a Victory....
30-12...Dont Try Audio Because even Yo textness Is wasting.....
Seein Vizions??Then My Lines Goin Kill You Like Final Destination.....
Go 2 Rapperz Change Yo Name to Suffer From Humiliation.....

pretty good...not great...i've seen a lot better from you...no personals...good structure ...decent flow...a couple of funny disses...

v-polifickk


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