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Old 06-24-04, 06:09 AM   #15
Tempa
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I'm goin wit wrenegade on this. Even though yo structure was kinda fucked. Rhymes go in 2's or it don't sound right. You had a part in yo verse that was 3 lines. I was lookin for the fourth to make it right but i neva found it. Oni yo lyrics just wasn't enough. I'm not hatin though. Elevate. Vote - Wrenegade

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