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Old 06-24-04, 09:55 AM   #6
Poppa Kap
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Ur actually not bad^. I thought u were a newb but if u make ur lines more consise and dispose of the~highlighting~rhymes and punches you will be pretty dope. These made me laugh from you...

Try az hard az you want ya cum off 0 to none like a bum'z bank account balance``
Hitz could process photoz of American Idol...still wont 'develop some talent'``

and

Hitz's a loner and he has "no-one" like a table of even numbers``
Cuz this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers``

the rest was ok...nufin too hard, you got good word play and got good wit...nice verse bro.

As for 40...ur verse ranged between basic....

Verse after verse i read the same OLD shit
Obsesesed wit gay people just 'cause you LOVE dick

Played

Who's hot? Me or you? betta give me an answer
You wouldn't be "Sick Wit It" if you drank AIDS and pissed CANCER
Only four lines deep but you ready to QUIT
Nigga soft, couldn't spit ~Hard~ if his ~Saliva~ was "Brick"

or just wack...

I need some real competition, batlling weak cats is old
You couldn't beat me if you were possessed by *Tupac's* soul

Nufin in ur verse I liked.

So vote=Dreadedwicksta