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There ain't shit "Dreadedwicksta" can say that'll make me Lose
Cause your style is played out like Under-Roos
^^decent personal good opener 7/10
Who's hot? Me or you? betta give me an answer
You wouldn't be "Sick Wit It" if you drank AIDS and pissed CANCER
^^hot shyt but its stretched 7/10
Only four lines deep but you ready to QUIT
Nigga soft, couldn't spit ~Hard~ if his ~Saliva~ was "Brick"
^^lol good bar nice punch 8/10
I need some real competition, batlling weak cats is old
You couldn't beat me if you were possessed by *Tupac's* soul
^^kinda weak and basic 5/10
In case you didn't get the MESSAGE,I'll just say it, You SUCK
Rhymes wouldn't move me if you put 'em on a *U-haul* Truck
^^seen stuff similar to this decent bar 7/10
You can save your wack repsonse 'Cause I know what's comin
"You're gay, You're a fag" be a original or somethin
^^decent punch 6/10
Verse after verse i read the same OLD shit
Obsesesed wit gay people just 'cause you LOVE dick
^^really basic 4/10
Beat you twice in one verse? sounds hard but I did it
Caught a lil cold now you think you sick? QUIT IT
^^good close nice punch 7/10

overall : 51/80

dreaded:


This's the end of this, Im serving ya, and round two's ya dinner plate``
Cuz the only time u are "beating the boards" Is when ya tryna skate``
^^good meta dcent punch nice opener 6/10
I’ll ‘tear~your~flows’ like rip~tides, ya easy to brake, ya be~soft``
Ya cant ‘bear~raw~blows’ like microwaves not set on defrost``
^^another good meta decent punch 6/10
Like school…I’ll cut ya up into fifths, leave ya bloody-like-periods``
Ya talent is no wher near-this, Ya just like William Hung, ugly-but-serious``
^^hottest bar in the battle funny shyt good meta and punch 10/10
Hitz's a loner and he has "no-one" like a table of even numbers``
Cuz this dudes circle of friends is smaller than neck holes in babys jumpers``
^^lol good shyt nice punch and meta 8/10
Ya teacher could be stoned and u still can't get high marks``
Cuz Hitz's bout to get K.O'd n beheaded like foriegners in iraq``
^^no tolerance for words that dont rhyme marks...irag...2/10
Readin' my verse is the only time ya seenin' 40calibahitz``
I flip the scriptz, think ya gon win ? mind must be playin trickz on tripz``
^^ticks on tripz? didnt make sense but good wordplay 5/10
Try az hard az you want ya cum off 0 to none like a bum'z bank account balance``
Hitz could process photoz of American Idol...still wont 'develop some talent'``
^^good meta and punch 1st line stretched and weak 5/10
So are u a cry baby or a grown man, or maybe your both?``
I guess u are a little kid cuz ya rhymes need plenty of room 4 growth``
^^good finisher more good meta's 7/10

overall : 49/80

vote:40caliberhitz

dreaded you had no punches and some of your lines were stretched and the bar were it didnt rhyme made you lose points....shorten your bars expand your vocab and use harder punches...you had multies but not good ones...wordplay was ok

caliber...you had a couple stretched lines too decent verse...hard punches pretty consistent...you also need to expand your vocab use more meta's better wordplay and use more multies...

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