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Old 06-24-04, 04:08 PM   #15
JPoll
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breakdown...
first up is kronick

You attempt the impossible, when u step 2 the cardinal, a rap genius so sick I live in the hospital/
A audible verse, even in text theres no stoppin em, flow is a ball and Im Todd Pinkston i stay droppin em//
4 no punch whatsoever...
Stay in ya place....ya flow is pointless, this battle aint a contest, I won with a ace/
Like Mase seek sum soul salvation, cuz my flow is Amazing yours is just a disgrace//
5 not really any punch
My flow hit'chu and knocks ya sandals off, I stop ya shitty flow like charmin tissue, damn u soft/
My pistol got handles, so dont get ya ankles crossed, cuz when my shells hit'cha, u gonna start bleeding ragu sauce//
4 no punch come on kid
And u gotta~be a fool if u thinkin u stopping~me, I'll deprive u of this win, nothing short of a robbery/
U probably got faith in ya flow, think you're a prodigy, but agaist me, u wouldn't have a chance in hell if u played tha Devil's lottery//
6 a little bit better
Me and u are total opposites, nobody wants to hear your flow...yet they say my flow is def/
Whats worse, u diggin a bottomless pit, going nowhere, while my flow has actual depth//5.5 sort of a punch i guess...

anyways not a good drop...but whatever...

no for davinci...
Kronic my alliteration is alienating your chance of a winning situation
You beat'n me? Kid, ya must be mistaken yar flow is just lyrical incoordiation
8 now that's a punch...
See my initial inclination is to deteriorate ya with humiliation
So these peeps come to the realization of your lyrical incapacitation,
6.5 pretty good...nice wordplay
B- real, It's a bit more than ironic, call'n yourself Kronic, the way ya just get smoked,
But honetly Kronic, I'll be modest, ya SUCK so bad your alias should be "toke"
8 hahahahhahahah
See you hold'n down a win is like a six year old with his liquor,
The only diffrence is, your loss comes up a little quicker
10 ahhahaha nice shit..hahahahahah
Heaven-sake allow me to spell out and demonstrate your fatal mistak
Y.O.U B.A.T.T.L.E.'N A V.E.T S.O.N, so your win column will deteriorate
7 nice shit...
Your herbish verb's ensure the only "lime-light" ya gonna see comes from concentrate
So ya put more "F-I-L-L-E-R" in ya verse than Pillsbury to compensate
7.5 good shit


nice drop

v- obviously davinci...

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