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Old 06-24-04, 04:46 PM   #40
DeLeon
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i dont like votin on topicals but here we go.

Meta- Damn.....imagery was nice dogg....your topical made it seem a lot more
real and shit...flow was good..wordplay was nice....vocab help it.just a nice
drop not much more i can say except for that rape shit was kinda funny

Flow Intel- for your 2nd topical not bad playa....i just think you need to put
a little more thought...kinda paint a picture...imagery was good..wordplay too
again overall another nice drop..i think that meta made me feel like i was there

vote-Meta