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willNova
dont put the //s after ur lines...thats newbish...ur structure was pretty good...flow was good for the most part...u had some nice metas...wordplay was basic, not very good...some of ur punches connected...personals were ok...
etcetera
dont feed off of his verse...thats gay...structure was good...flow was on target...u had a few metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were aight...
Overall
this battle was close...ectetera had better wordplay...both had a good structure as well as a good flow...both had ok personals...willnova had better metas...and because ectetera fed, it took away from those punches, so willnova took that category as well...basing off of that...willnova gets my vote...
VOTE - WILLNOVA
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