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Banned: Spamming
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IP:
Deleon..
Your the worst clown, You'll get crushed in this 2nd round..
You dont have to run 10 yards to be the First-Down..
You cant help to admit.. that Im one hell of a spitter..
And dog you aint "SHIT" But your verses beg to differ..
Nice^, not original concepts but nice witty flips.
Me winning is Clear CUT, Off with ya head.. get it ho?..
I'm going to have a few Al-Qaidas Direct this Video..
This could have been a good line but u didnt say it right, i think if re worded it could of been a better punch.
Nobodyz Seein Your Raps Thats why Im believing your wack..
Check the Brackets ..Your 3-1,ranked 21st and theres a reason for that..
^I enjoyed all those lines above, but these lines are thought were pretty wack
Ill leave you on the streets, Ya punches are not as hard as mines..
Ya lines aint workin, They should be written on cardboard signs..
I see u were tryin a "tramp" line the way u connected the signs and streets but it was pretty crap.
Face it, take a look in the mirror and realize your not hot dude..
He leaves pauses for laughs after his lines..but the voters forgot too..
^thats more of a diss at the voters...i understand what ur trying to say but its too basic.
Aside from that strong verse, a few personals and had some good wit and originality.
Dfrozt.
First off...im voting against and u and dont wine because u "beat" me last week, which may I add was bullshit and also its do not say I do not understand ur verse, coz i udnerstand it and thought it was generally not good. Also do not "use quotations", its what newbs do, so for acted like a newb im a treat u like one.
Heres what u did right.....
You woulda got another award too, if deadly didn’t hate
Sure you coulda pulled it off, you was june’s best biter to date
^shudd been re worded but it was decent, had to read it a couple of times to get the wit of it.
Kid is like lemon up, just a fuckin wannabe ‘sprite’
Wishes he was a ‘legend’ but he more of a Tyson who can’t fight
^that was dope...good personal and good meta...well done newbie.
What u did wrong...
Rookie don’t understand ‘wordplay’, it something he ain’t yet ‘caught’
That’s why when I bust the sick shit he’s still ‘molestin thoughts’
^haha what a wack attempt of wordplay.
Time to elevate, find new techniques, read your sig, you proclaim rookie proudly
Found 8 different ways to say your shit is wack and the message still kinda cloudy
^make sure ur punches make sense...what message is cloudly?
People always hatin on newbs, strange cause you still a virgin to rap
We all knew it wasn’t your flow that made the booty go ………..
^What a bollox closer. Dont tell me u used it because it plays off his Luda avy because this was wack.
Vote DeLeon
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