New to RB
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i gotta say willnova
will did not have the greatest of punchlines all the time, but i felt some of them.
his structure was better adn it flowed better
wonders was still a decent verse, i liked a few of his punclines better, but i did not like the flow or the structure. one line would be too short the other too long. if you would fix it up and haev maybe one better punchline you would have taken it
close battle
very good
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