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Hoops
get rid of the - - and "" between and around ur words...thats newbish...structure was ok...most of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a lil due the stretchness...u had some tight metas...wordplay was also pretty tight...some of ur punches connected...no personals...
SpitaFlame
stop spacing ur bars man...structure was pretty good...flow was also pretty nice...no metas...attempted wordplay, but most of it was pretty weak...maybe a few of ur punches connected at most....no personals...
Overall
neither had personals...spitaflame had the better structure...as well as the better flow...hoops had more, and better metas...as well as better wordplay...his punches also connected more...so basing off of that...hoops gets my vote...
VOTE - HOOPS
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