geneicide nice verse for a newb. really good for ur level.u had persoanals that werent weak and some good rhyming in there.jus keep elevatin and battle good ppl u get more practice.eye ur verse needed some work it wasnt that great. need some stronger punches and shorten out ur lines thats all i can say about ur verse.this was an ok battl;e but my vote goes to genicide for better personals

v/genecide