hmm.. i gotta say, flow goes to forgotten flow.. punches goes to forgotten flow.. break down:
DON:
forgotten cause nobody wants another bullshit white artist...
you were a fool to answer my thread and start this...
^second line was filler.. bad for a opener...first line was alright tho..
atlanta? the south...if your all so dirty ill introduce you to bounty...
you wipe your ass wit it...ill send you a value pack spread it to all the counties...
^ok punch about the south being dirty(dirty south).. ok
thatll take care of your filth...now to work on your verse...
2-0...im so scared...im gona rape you like brittany had by fred durst...
^you should have said something about him not being to flow or something on that second line... you said you were gonna rape him, but didtn descrive it well... filler
enough of your games...youve awoken a pissed off italian...
u thought Last of the Samuri was scary?...well whops are less afraid of battelin...
^more filler...
thats right...i Forgot im thirsty pass me my can of whoop ass...
your like another mestrul cycle...give you a week and this Flow wont last...
^kinda played.. but decent punch
over all verse was 6.5/10
Forgotten Flow:
You wanna spit?, I'll cut out ya tongue and make you garggle bleach in ya mouth,
the Don?, looks like we got a Nas wannabe in the house,
^decent personal
if you wan me to, I can get you real comfortable wit a nurse,
the rules said no bullshit, so why'd you even bother to write a verse,
^ok..
how many of ya battles was to sorry niggaz? that doesnt make you a vet,
just take ya own advice and start talkin bout how u was doin ya best,
^filler
dont push the kid, Just take a loss and do your job,
callin himself the godfather, wit no connection to the mob
^decent personal
I throw more punches then Roy Jones, and keep my foes closer than my friends,
that's a damn shame, a top nigga gone be the victim of a third win...
^played bit on how you become part of anothers stats..heard roy jones bit before... played.. other than that..decent punch
over all 6.7/10..
both verses were cool... but i was with Flow more on this one... mostly cause his punches stuck more, and flow was better...
return the favor if u have 100+ posts...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131511 me Vs. SpitaFLame
much appreciated